First Draft Of Script And Storyboard

Deep Pockets

3 Characters in the car

Character 2 – Do you think they will turn up?

Character 1 – I hope they do because i don’t want to get caught with this amount of gear on us

Character 3 – Stop being such a wuss

Character 2 – I think that might be them

Character 1 – What that car over there?

Character 3 – Yes that car over there you tit! Give them the signal

Character 1 Introduced

‘There’s always a dumb one in the group, there’s not a lot use for his brain but his very useful with his fists’

(All characters get out of the car and it then cuts to another shot of the other group of people pulling up and getting out of their car)

(The two groups get out and start walking towards each other carrying packages)

Character 2 introduced

‘This is ....., I met him while when I was doing time inside. He is a natural born killer and wouldn’t think twice about putting a bullet between someone’s eyes’

(Two leaders are walking out to the middle slightly in front of the other characters)

(Two main people in each gang meet in the middle and begin a conversation and exchanging the packages)

Character 3 introduced

‘This is me. They call me ...... I am the brains of the bunch. I organise when, what, where and how we are going to get away with it’

(They begin walking back to the cars)

Character 3 (narrator) – It is nice when a deal takes and it is fair. The thing is with us we never play fair!

(Pull out guns, aim, fire)

(Freeze picture with title ‘Deep Pockets’)


Storyboard

We plan on going to visit our set and to run through our shots and make changes to the following storyboard.

1. Shot of car already waiting (pans down)

2.Camera goes inside the car, over the shoulder shot

3. Close up of Character 3

4. Over the shoulder shot of other car coming in

5. Shot of Character 3 speaking (over the shoulder)

6. Close up of Character 1 (goes to still iamge with introduction)

7. Long shot of car pulling up

8. Mid shot of car and other characters getting out

9. Mid shot of Characters 1, 2 and 3 getting out of their car

10. Close up of character 2 ( goes to still image with introduction)

11. Aerial long shot of the two groups coming together

12. Long shot of bag being thrown

13. Close up of Character 1 and 3 looking through bag of money

14. Close up of main other character

15. Close up of Character 2 and 3 (at slightly low angle to give them power)

16. Close up of Character 2 and 3 opening case of drugs

17. Goes to still image of Character 3 (introduction)

18. Close up of drugs exchanged

19. Long shot of the two groups seperating and walking away

20. Long shot of Characters 1, 2 and 3 walking towards the camera

21. Long shot of Characters 1, 2 and 3 walking to the car then turning and pulling out guns

22. Still image of the the shot in the previous shot but with the title across the middle